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Not bad. It looks great. I'd have thought that the cinema owner, after having picked the critic's brain, would have realized that critics are just not worth impressing, instead of then having a panic attack before finally being able to turn out something that the critic enjoys.

On the other hand, it does a good job of pointing out that people don't want fluff. That the artist with real world experience will always connect with audiences better than the artist without substance.

I dig it.

CosmicMonocle responds:

Great feedback! Thanks for watching :)

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines
"Your submission must not be a modified version of someone else's work."

The song isn't yours, neither are the animations, and you've tagged it under Comedy - Original? By all means, dump this kind of half assery on YouTube, but keep it off Newgrounds.

One star because the voice over was funny. However...

Newgrounds Wiki: Game and Movie Guidelines
http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

"Your submission must not be a modified version of someone else's work"

This would definitely do well on YouTube, but it doesn't belong here.

eqftc responds:

I collected the footage and made it myself, so I thought maybe this would work under parody. I wrote it, voiced it, captured it, and edited it, so I feel like I've made a new thing that isn't a form of somebody else's work. I'm really just trying to reach out to some people who may want to work together and put this up as an example.

"Your submission must not be a modified version of someone else's work."

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

You've just redubbed an episode of Peppa Pig. This doesn't belong here.

You should try to resubmit this with an "M" rating. The topics and language are not appropriate for an "E" rating.

StephenPing responds:

When I submitted, i make make clear, that there is adult language, somehow I messed up, sry for this

Nicely animated, man (especially for a first ever animation). Once the sounds come in on your next ep it's going to be even better. Looking forward to it. :-)

Tom-Par responds:

Cheers! Im pretty happy with the outcome. But next time I'll animate to the sound haha

This is really good! Love the character design. I'm not an animator (I'd like to be) so while I was scrutinizing, trying to find something to possibly point out, the only thing I could notice is that as the tie flicks up it looks to me like it lingers a little too long before flicking back down, but again, I'm not an animator so I don't really know what I'm talking about...but I watch A LOT of cartoons (that counts for something, right?).
Keep it up! (the animating, not the tie ;-P)

UltimateB responds:

Thanks man! I'm going to try and get more animation up.

3rd times the charm eh? Glad it's up and running nicely. Good job man! I've enjoyed watching this again, and again. ;-)

I thought you had submitted this already? I remember voting for it a couple of days ago, and rated it highly. The only reason I'm rating it 3 stars this time, is that you've got two voices going over the top of each other in the first 16 seconds of the video making it difficult to make out what either of them are saying.

CubePunks responds:

This video had some difficulties when publishing.

Before a moderator pulled it because the file didnt run on some computers. So I had to export the file again.

When uploading the corrected version, I accidently had the short's audio, and audio from an update for my YouTube channel, running at the same time. I noticed this issue and re-uploaded a corrected file before publishing.

How you found the faulty cut before I authenticated the corrected audio, I have no clue. Sorry for the inconvenience and please give the video a second chance.

-KMB

Finally, a Madness episode with a story that isn't set in a grey warehouse. I loved it (and I'm not really a fan of Madness at all).

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