Not bad. It looks great. I'd have thought that the cinema owner, after having picked the critic's brain, would have realized that critics are just not worth impressing, instead of then having a panic attack before finally being able to turn out something that the critic enjoys.
On the other hand, it does a good job of pointing out that people don't want fluff. That the artist with real world experience will always connect with audiences better than the artist without substance.
I dig it.
Great feedback! Thanks for watching :)
One star because the voice over was funny. However...
Newgrounds Wiki: Game and Movie Guidelines
http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines
"Your submission must not be a modified version of someone else's work"
This would definitely do well on YouTube, but it doesn't belong here.
I collected the footage and made it myself, so I thought maybe this would work under parody. I wrote it, voiced it, captured it, and edited it, so I feel like I've made a new thing that isn't a form of somebody else's work. I'm really just trying to reach out to some people who may want to work together and put this up as an example.
You should try to resubmit this with an "M" rating. The topics and language are not appropriate for an "E" rating.
When I submitted, i make make clear, that there is adult language, somehow I messed up, sry for this
Nicely animated, man (especially for a first ever animation). Once the sounds come in on your next ep it's going to be even better. Looking forward to it. :-)
Cheers! Im pretty happy with the outcome. But next time I'll animate to the sound haha
This is really good! Love the character design. I'm not an animator (I'd like to be) so while I was scrutinizing, trying to find something to possibly point out, the only thing I could notice is that as the tie flicks up it looks to me like it lingers a little too long before flicking back down, but again, I'm not an animator so I don't really know what I'm talking about...but I watch A LOT of cartoons (that counts for something, right?).
Keep it up! (the animating, not the tie ;-P)
Thanks man! I'm going to try and get more animation up.
3rd times the charm eh? Glad it's up and running nicely. Good job man! I've enjoyed watching this again, and again. ;-)
Finally, a Madness episode with a story that isn't set in a grey warehouse. I loved it (and I'm not really a fan of Madness at all).
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